Some Points to Clear Before We Can Release Revised VersionEdit
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Ume : *sigh* jeez...
Ume: What the hell are you doing ?
Ume: If you're a man, you got to show some guts !
Ume : Stop being so indecisive !
Shunpei: Bu....but ume-san...
Shunpei: Is it okay for me to do such a ....
Ume : Why not ?
Hibiki: It's okay
Shunpei: Is it really okay????
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translation: The Yaneura
step 28 the wind rises
Shunpei: despicable !!
Shunpei: Good... morning
Abumi : I was just about to wake you up
Shunpei: Ah... thank you
Manager: Have you completely recovered from your cold ?
Mother: Hizume, wait until everybody is present !
Hibiki : it seems this year's cold is so bad that even idiots will catch* it
note: that's a reference to the japanese expression that only idiots don't catch colds
Hibiki : Time for breakfast
Hibiki: What ?
Tazuna: Why are you blushing !?
Shunpei: It's....it's nothing !
Manager: Seems that today will be pretty hot
Manager: Everyone, be careful not to collapse from dehydration
Tazuna: Like he said
Shunpei: Yes, of course !
Hibiki: What should I do ? Maybe I should have cut my hair shorter
Tazuna: Why would want it shorter ? You'll look like a cactus
Abumi: When I'm done with the laundry, I'll be going to go shopping so...
Abumi: Hibiki-chan, wanna come with ?
Hibiki: Yes, thank you
Abumi: Everyone if you have any dirty clothes, make sure to leave them to me.
Abumi: Well then, let us eat
Abumi: Shunpei-kun, if you have any...
Shunpei: No thanks !!
Ume: Whatcha doin' ?
Shunpei: Woah !
Shunpei: Just as you can see, hahaha
Ume: Oh, you're cleaning by your own
Ume: That help
Ume: If ya're lookin' for simple tasks, there's plenty of 'em. Just ask
Shunpei: Yes, yes
Shunpei: It's since I had "these things" in my room that I started* to have weird dreams
note: actually, no! he had weird dreams at least in step 9, 13 and 18;
yet these things only arrived in step 23.
after returning them he still have weird dream in step 33.
Ume: what ?
Shyunpei: "These things", I'm returning them !
Ume: Huh !?
Ume: I see, are ya done with 'em ?
Ume: Were they of any use ?
Shunpei: What use !?
Ume: So ya didn't like 'em...
Ume: Right, wait a sec' ...
Ume: Here, here,
Ume: Have those instead !
Shunpei: Just how many boxes of "these things" do you have...?
Hibiki: Well then, I'll be going for a while
Shunpei: That's what happen when you don't pay attention....
Shunpei: Hey ! Hey ! Kids can't go in the grazing pasture !
Shunpei: huh ?
Shunpei: A..Ah, well if it isn't Hibiki-san
Shunpei: Wow, It's because I didn't think you would cut your hair that short. that...
Yuki: Who the hell are you ?
Yuki: Never seen you before
Shunpei: Whaaat !?
Ume: Ah !
Hibiki: I'm home
Translator note : one of the rare few pannels where Ume's eyes are actually wide open !
Ume: ah ! Hibiki-chan ! It's terrible ya see !
Ume: The manager must be informed !
Shunpei: Who...who is this person, Ume-san !?
Shunpei: He has the same face as Hibiki-san !
Shunpei: I was thinking that Hibiki-san had her hair cut real short...
Hibiki: What are you saying about my hair ?
Ume&Shunpei: Woah! It's really been cut real short !
Yuki: This place too sure ain't change at ALL
- Not a Typo, Yuki speaks in a rude way - I've decided to omit this note*
Hibiki: Yuki !?
yuki: It's been about one year and half ain't it ?
Hibiki: If...if you're coming home, at least one phone call would have the least you could do!
Yuki: Sorry about that.
Hibiki: Is it too much to ask for one letter in 1 year and a half?
Hibiki: I had no idea if you were doing well or not!
Yuki: What? You usually care about things like that?
Hibiki: Not really
Hibiki: If something were to happen to you, I would surely realize it....
Umi: He's the oldest son of the manager ya see...
Umi: Hibiki-chan's twin brother.
yuki: it has been a year and a half, hasn't it ?
hibiki: why didn't you call first before you came home ?
hibiki: not a single letter in a year and a half !
hibiki: i don't know at all whether you are doing fine !
yuki: what ? are you worrying about daily issues like that ?
hibiki: not really
hibiki: if anything happened to you, i'll surely know...
umi: he is the oldest son, yūki
umi: hibiki-chan's twin brother
shunpei: twins !
umi: yes !
yuki: who's that ?
yuki: new employee ?
umi: actually, bla bla bla
yuki: a, ha
yuki: how is it free-loading at our place ?
yuki: my elder sisters are pretty good right ?
shunpei: a, yeah...
shunpei: i would be lying if i deny that
yuki: don't expose your [umakke], stupid
shunpei: yes ?
yuki: i'm coming in to see father's face
note: yūki uses 親父 (oyaji = old man)
shunpei: umakke ?
shunpei: e, hibiki-san,
shunpei: is my [umakke] exposed ?
hibiki: how could i know such thing !!
shunpei: no.. that...
ken: what is ummakke ?
ken: shunpei-kun, that is...
ken: a male horse that gets an erection without regards of time and place
shunpei: somehow a guy whom i just met for the first time can see my nature